I went back and edited that really long chapter in News from Dead Mule Swamp. It was easily broken into two chapters of a better length.
Also, I added in something that is important to the story later on, which I had forgotten to introduce. Then I made some changes that the writers' group members suggested, and now I'm all set to begin chapter 12.
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