Here's my story:
"Fabricate clews? Never! I am the sleuth extraordinaire, not the butler who did it. Excuse me, I spy a mote of sinister dust."
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Monday, June 20, 2011
Succintly Yours- Flash Fiction
Grandma's Goulash regularly runs a Flash Fiction challenge. Quite a few people enter. Here's my next installment of fewer than 140 characters (you can choose 140 characters or 140 words). The extra credit word is "fabricate." Here's the picture that is to be the inspiration:
Here's my story:
"Fabricate clews? Never! I am the sleuth extraordinaire, not the butler who did it. Excuse me, I spy a mote of sinister dust."
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To see other entries visit Grandma's Goulash
Here's my story:
"Fabricate clews? Never! I am the sleuth extraordinaire, not the butler who did it. Excuse me, I spy a mote of sinister dust."
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To see other entries visit Grandma's Goulash
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12 comments:
Ooh, I really like the veddy British spelling and attitude. Those old-time butlers, I mean sleuths were no slouches!
I love the accent! Nice one
Ohh like the accent. Well done.
Never trust a clever man . . . ;-)
Oh-my! He'd best stay away from my house! He wouldn't need a spy glass to spot dust here!
Cute!
:)
Oh-my! He'd best stay away from my house! He wouldn't need a spy glass to spot dust here!
Cute!
:)
A sleuth extraordinaire would never fabricate clues! Would they?? ;)
Wonderful, another sleuth extraordinaire with all the humility of Hercule Poirot. Gotta love it.
— K
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
A wonderful use for the glass, Sharkie. I must get one to check up on Mrs. Jim's cleaning. She misses some dust, I know.
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Ah yes, all dust is sinister... LOL! Good one this week.
Lovely dialogue. It told the story and I felt as if I were listening rather than reading.
An engaging story with a fun twist. I wonder if I could get him to come and take care of my dust?
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